[Minacious]

I'm going to have to agree with RC here.

The last thing a car enthusiast wants to have happen in a video showcasing a car they are passionate about, is for that car to be replaced by uncessary images to lengthen the video or be unsuccessfully artful.

Lose the girl on the swing. Lose the girl on the piano. Lose the guy on the violin. Continue with the shots of the car at rest during these building moments. If you just have to use shots of music being played, then make them shots (quick shots) of whoever performed the piece. Anything else ends up looking disconnected.

The shots where onlookers are staring at the car are perfect.

Everything else worked.